navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » Captivated
Open Poetry #46
Post A Reply Post New Topic Captivated Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
whisperingwalt
Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-05-07 01:16 PM



Soul to Soul

Your eyes sparkle with life
Your words captivate my thoughts
Your smile makes me smile
When your soul touches mine

© Copyright 2010 Walter Aguilar - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-07 02:07 PM


they say the eyes are the windows to the soul.  I like this... very short, sweet and to the  romantic point good job! ebm
whisperingwalt
Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
2 posted 2010-05-07 03:53 PM


Thanks for the kind words...the eyes are definately the windows..wrote this a awhile back...always takes my back to a good place.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-05-07 07:25 PM


Your thoughts are endearing.

This was so nice to read, so easy on my eyes.

Welcome to Passions, whisperingwalt~

Zeigeist
Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
4 posted 2010-05-07 07:42 PM


Nicely done, clear and to the point.

Zeitgeist.

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2010-05-07 09:04 PM



Short and sweet and quite romantic.

Quite cute in fact. Well done Walt.

Lindsay

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » Captivated

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary