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Open Poetry #46

Just the Right Places

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-05-06 07:04 PM

Just the Right Places

I like the way
a woman bulges and recesses
in just the right places
so when a man and a woman
come together,
everything fits just right
and performs like a
finely tuned Jaguar.

JamesLee
05May
2010

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-05-06 07:47 PM

Yo James,

I really like the way this poem works. I need you to buy me one of those Jaguars though, just to go with the poem.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2010-05-07 03:33 AM

this is pefect and so beautiful.

yann

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