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xXSilentMelodiesXx
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since 2008-05-27
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0 posted 2010-05-06 01:26 AM


Words are scratching at my mind
The thoughts they speak are far from kind
There's a sanction I cannot find
Well truly, I think we all are blind.

Find the light within the dark
Search enough - You'll find the mark
Perhaps it's just a tiny spark
An abandoned house -- A lonely park.

A cry rings out within the night
I spread my wings and thus take flight
My strength is gone - I've lost the fight
I never found that spark of light.

A tombstone placed right on the ground
People pass without a sound
A purpous that was never found
Another name that's not renowned.

A jerk of life -- Eyes sprung wide
An alarm that blares "eleven o'five"
You're amazed that you're alive
Once again your dreams have lied.

For beside you lies a friend
Yes, it's true, you're only ten
Your dreams and fears he always mends
For his heart to you he did lend.

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2010-05-10 12:48 PM


A very nicely written poem, with great rhyming and delightful read.  I hope others will find and delight in it as well.
   David

I thank the LORD everyday
He has given me something to say
And to share with others,
My Friends, my sisters, my brothers!

To God Be the Glory!

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