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passing shadows
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0 posted 2010-05-04 01:05 PM



God reached down and plucked me from a life
where I thought I had a chance for more.
He dropped me down into a place
where no one has ever heard of war.

I'm in the middle of folks who just get by.
They want nothing else in life but to survive.
A good garden, going to church, having a meal.
They don't question other reasons for being alive.

In the middle of folks who just get by
maybe one day I'll stop asking God why.


© Copyright 2010 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2010-05-04 04:11 PM


Sounds peaceful to me, Dixie.


M

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2010-05-04 05:53 PM


Yo dear Passing shadows;

Thhat probably would be a good idea.  Never forget how busy God is.

Love Bobby

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2010-05-04 06:26 PM


We get so wrapped up in the complexities of our daily living that we forget to appreciate the simpliciities of life and to recogniie in them the magnificense of God's works. Your wonderful poem reminded me'

Thank you
Liz

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2010-05-04 08:28 PM


Nice...James
Toerag
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5 posted 2010-05-05 07:54 AM


Guess we all wonder why.
Larry C
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6 posted 2010-05-31 07:36 PM


No, don't stop. He's always there, he just doesn't explain it very often. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2010-06-01 01:47 AM


For everything there is a reason.
2islander2
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8 posted 2010-06-01 01:48 PM


as long as you ask yourself questions you move, I love the simplicity of the poem that condamn a way of life, this is a sensitive and rich poem....


regards

yann

lucky
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9 posted 2010-06-02 02:52 AM


I don't talk to God enough... A good reminder.

dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


The Lady
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10 posted 2010-06-07 01:08 AM




you speak with your own voice Dixie
and this is so you.

Amaryllis
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11 posted 2010-06-07 09:00 AM


That is so lovely  
He will explain, someday, when you are in that blessed place.
~A

Andrew Scott
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12 posted 2010-06-09 12:40 PM


I want to do more than just get by... though that sometimes seems to be just enough. But I rarely, if ever, ask why? So where the hell does that put me? And do I really care? Thanks for the rambling thoughts.

One of my favorite sayings...No matter where you go, there you are. So, you better like where you're at.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

LindsayP
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13 posted 2010-06-12 12:00 PM



As long as you are happy dear Dixie, that

is the main thing. Things will turn out right. a big hug.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
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14 posted 2010-06-12 08:13 AM


If you are content with life, isn`t that enough?  A nice poem that makes people think.
Lamar Cole
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15 posted 2010-06-12 09:17 AM


No war, good garden, and church all sound good.

Being rich in love can be more lasting and fulfilling than being rich in material possessions.

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