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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-05-04 08:26 AM

Waves of silence
Slap her
Shores
Like insults
The turned tide
Slips away
Leaving her high and dry
With
Her worried wonderings
On a
Brilliant sunset horizon
Teased blood red to black
Searching
The stars
For answers
That never
Answer back
She cries by the light
Of the futile
Full moon

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-05-04 09:23 AM

Ahhh....

HERE is your first poem!
Makes me miss "home"....being CA.

It's rather dry where I live now...
not desert...
but certainly not the shorelines
of my childhood.

Well done!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-04 09:37 AM

Thanks Sunshine! Glad you liked it! ~EBM

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2010-05-04 01:12 PM

I see this scene over and over again living by the ocean, and will never tire of it.

Welcome to Passions, and a very lovely first post.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-05-04 01:45 PM

Thank you Mysteria, I'm glad you liked it, I appreciate the welcome. EBM

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2010-05-04 08:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

VelvetVampress
Junior Member

since 2010-04-24

Posts 26

6 posted 2010-05-05 01:16 AM

I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing.

~Velvet Vampress~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2010-05-05 07:40 AM

Welcome, Eusta. Enjoyed your first post.
Ida

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

8 posted 2010-05-05 08:27 AM

I really enjoy reading your poems.
You have a very distinctive style that I like.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

9 posted 2010-05-05 09:17 AM

JM, VV, Mm, CG- I'm very happy to hear you all are enjoying my work and I do so appreciate you letting me know. I am very much liking the warm waters here-they are very inviting!~ebm

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2010-05-05 10:47 AM

EBM..can picute this scene as it wets the warm sand with color.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

11 posted 2010-05-05 11:51 AM

DS, thanks for the time and attention to my work, I respect your opinion very much and am quite flattered.~ebm

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

12 posted 2010-05-05 12:59 PM

Very different from usual sunset shorelines. Lot of vigor in the seemingly serene sunset. One day I will go the beach and get lapped by the waves

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