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srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

0 posted 2010-05-03 06:39 AM

Neither the sky nor the moon’s phases

beckon my mood now – as

you are here in every sense

without the passing desultoriness

I see you inside my closed eyes

my deep breaths pump the sweet love ras

that fills my mind with your craving

as if to bring near the moment

of knowing I am no different from you

you are the wine I promised myself

to drown in and lose my balance

I have made the plunge and kept the word

I will have no complaints nor regrets

if you choose to subsume me – and

I need to explain to none

if I even come out of your hold

anyway, people make their own stories

that people want to listen

nothing changes between you and me

Live Life!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2010-05-03 02:42 PM

Welcome this was so romantic and beautiful!!!
thanks for sharing!!!
~ARH

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-05-03 09:02 PM

You've got the right attitude, and it is refreshing to see it put into words.

Enjoyed your poem very much

Welcome to the blue pages~

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

3 posted 2010-05-04 01:39 AM

ARH, BluesSerenade,

Thank you very much for the kind words. It means a lot to me.

~srizah~

Live Life!

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-05-04 07:51 AM

Romantic to say the least. Nice but what does ras mean?

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

5 posted 2010-05-04 08:10 AM

Hi Earl,

Thanks for asking. Ras is a Hindi word that would translate to essence/juice - probably juice more correct.

~srizah~

Live Life!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2010-05-04 11:06 AM

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Message!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

7 posted 2010-05-04 11:29 AM

Hi Sunshine,

Thanks for your card and help in explaining the feature. The image you had chosen was very good.

~srizah~

Live Life!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2010-05-05 04:54 PM

Wow that was great!!!

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

9 posted 2010-05-06 12:58 PM

Hi Juju,

Thanks for the kind workds!

~srizah~

Live Life!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2010-05-11 09:00 PM

Nice...James

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

11 posted 2010-05-12 02:46 AM

James,

Thank you very much.

~srizah~

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