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LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria

0 posted 2010-05-02 09:49 PM




          Why I Love Australia

Since my early days when the die was cast,
I’ve travelled wide o’er this planet vast,
And so many times have I been asked,
Is there a better land than Australia.
A biased opinion I must not give,
For places many I’ve worked and lived,
But when through them all I’ve sieved,
To name a better place has always been a failure.

To hear the vibrant yell of an excited crowd
At a football match when they roar aloud,
It’s one of the things that make me proud
Of this great land of Australia.
To stand in the bar with a glass of beer
And share a yarn with mates held dear,
There’s no place on earth where you can live freer
Than in this great land of Australia.

To gaze at those great Kosciusko peaks,
For of magic beauty it always speaks,
Where bellbirds ring by cascading creeks
Along with lyre-birds in their resplendent regalia.
To gaze on that great Riverina plain
Where wildfowl abound in a vast domain,
To see wildflowers bloom after soaking rain,
It’s just another wonder of Australia.

To see a bounding mob of kangaroos
Or a swirling cloud of cockatoos,
Gaudy coloured parrots in reds and blues,
In fact, in every colour of a dahlia.
To hear a dingo’s howl from a camp-fire bright,
A flight of swans on a moonlit night,
The swish of wings as they pass from sight,
That’s why I love Australia.

Lindsay

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2010-05-02 10:52 PM


Lindsay, this is the best poem I've ever seen from you, not only for the content but also the rhythm, rhyme and positive flow of the piece. One could almost believe your words were sincere....

....as I sure they WERE!!!! Great poem for a great country! Nicely done....

Zeigeist
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2 posted 2010-05-02 11:27 PM


Oh yes my friend, very nicely done.

Zeitgeist.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-05-03 08:42 PM


Just wonderful...Love your passion and pride!  

Thanks for the virtual tour.

I was so there!

Honeybee
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4 posted 2010-05-03 08:43 PM


This is wonderful!
Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 2010-05-04 08:00 AM


Rhythm and rhyme nicely done as mentioned.  It flowed very well.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-05-04 08:42 PM


Obviously a man that appreciates his blessings...James
Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2010-05-04 09:33 PM


Yo Lindsay,

Australia is a lovely place.  I’ve always enjoyed working there.  

I haven’t been there for about fifteen or twenty years.  

It seems every time I go to Australia it’s burning.  

Perhaps I better stay away.

Bobby

Toerag
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Ala bam a
8 posted 2010-05-05 07:53 AM


This is the first of your work I've read. Almost paints a picture. Very well done.
LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria
9 posted 2010-05-05 09:53 PM



By golly Mike that is a real thrill coming from a poet of your understsanding and

expertise. I'm so glad you read it and  enjoyed it and I sincerely thank you for that. God bless.

Lindsay

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
10 posted 2010-05-05 10:02 PM



To Zietgiest, Blues Seranade, Melissa, Earl, James, Bobby, Toerag, thank you all

for your very kind comments, you have made my day and an extra thanks to Toerag for dropping in as well. God bless you all.

Lindsay

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