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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2010-05-02 03:15 PM




With nothing to see
and nothing to do,
I decided to sleep
in a room with a view

I stretched myself out,

and having unfurled,

I filled up
the nothing
and called it
the World

It all seems
outside

of my room
with a view,

where there's
so much to see
and so much to do

From the bottomless pit
to the tip
of the sky,

it's all
in my window

and the window is I

***

© Copyright 2010 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
1 posted 2010-05-02 03:53 PM


Absolutely right!  Enjoyed!

Helen

OldBuddyOldPal
Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87

2 posted 2010-05-02 07:59 PM


wonderful!!!
latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2010-05-02 08:15 PM


You keep getting better and better! latearrival
Joe Houck
Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california
4 posted 2010-05-03 02:41 AM


unbelievably good...great stuff
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2010-05-05 07:32 AM


I really love everything you're writing lately, Larry. Can't wait for the next one.
                                 Ida

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2010-05-08 12:30 PM


really a nice read...very much enjoyed this...well done!
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