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Open Poetry #46

A Movie of Your Life

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-30 09:58 PM

A Movie of Your Life

If you could make a
movie of your life,
would you like
what you would see,
would you be treating
those you care for right,
warm and soft & tenderly?
What of your spouse,
are you loving them
and are they loving you,
what about your children
are they glad that they
were born to you?
How about your friends,
do you appreciate
the things they do?
In the movie would all
of your dreams come true
or would the movie be
about the tragedy of you...

JamesLee
30April
2010

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2010-04-30 10:26 PM

A very good poem James

Much enjoyed. Take care.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

2 posted 2010-05-01 07:29 AM

This poem grapped at me and touched me with its brute honesty. A stand out.

OldBuddyOldPal
Member

since 2008-12-15

Posts 87

3 posted 2010-05-01 12:42 PM

clever theme to make a thoughtful point.
A+

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