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passing shadows
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0 posted 2010-04-30 12:01 PM



He woke this morning raging.
I was there to catch his whim.

I played the guitar afterwards.
I was thinking of another man again.

He broke inside me then.

He bends and I break-
it's too easy now to fall.
I wish for other days and years
when I seemed to have it all.

He woke this morning raging
and I had to please when
I was thinking of some other man
and closed my eyes again.


© Copyright 2010 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-04-30 12:03 PM


you and me and him again...but you strum lovely..enjoyed you ms
passing shadows
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2 posted 2010-04-30 12:05 PM


indeed DS

yes, you know

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2010-04-30 02:42 PM


Well brutally honest and to the point as usual and well written as usual thank you..

Goldenrose.


Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

Toerag
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4 posted 2010-04-30 03:52 PM


I may pick my Larrivee,
My Martin just for fun
But I do as you do,
I think of another one.

This was a great write gal.....

Klassy Lassy
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5 posted 2010-04-30 10:41 PM


Errant recollection of a warmer yesteryear,
emotion lies believing in a love not here.
Past encounters wound a heart upon arrow's beam,
a bleeding melancholy waning broken dream.

Aww, Dixie, this time you break my heart with your words.  

KL

LindsayP
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6 posted 2010-04-30 10:44 PM



Dear Dixie I hope that other man is worthy of your thoughts. Thoughts are often the

first step down the wrong path, just be careful. A big hug dear friend.

Lindsay

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