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Open Poetry #46

of a pearl's suggestion

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-04-29 07:01 AM

of my tides would you be stirred to gentle anger then
as my ocean was ubiquitous and antagonistic
frothing the lions of my loins against your bow

jutting rigid my currents to your thrusting grind
to wear your rudder into my furrowing curl
would you gnash your urgency deep enough to swallow

or just sip the clear weeping of suggestions pearl

would your mistress with her amber eyeing glances
shiver your splinters from the walls of wanton
writing them as writhes of neptune's complications

upon that slender precision of your persuasion
bending the long limbed will of your seduction
round some demon seeded sea with ringless gloving

to just sip the clear weeping of a pearl's suggestion

___________

daark (sloop ms p series)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-04-29 08:53 PM

Persuavive, sweet seduction!!
Love the ebb and flow and how you conjur up the ocean air.

Nice, DS~

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2010-04-29 11:29 PM

love this
as a water baby
and pearl collector

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2010-04-30 06:00 AM

ms bluezy...thanks babe

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ms slick...thank you lady friend...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-04-30 12:28 PM

You caught me pondering over this one,
looking through past poems for a poetic
response in kind...and while I've written
of pearls, this poetic piece reminds one

never to take anything for granted.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-04-30 12:45 PM

ms sun...had to use the "pearl" from Pirates of C movie since this particular vessel seems possesed with a special charm. thanks lady friend

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