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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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alas ms penelope, why will our winds not linger is it the jealous odin in his spiteful pouting or some vixen temptress wanting her bed rebroken we both know of these sensations, perhaps of male how the wood of mornings punctures our sky with almost a sighing seduction, a begger's grip for all hands on deck to polish into submission and you would rock your bow in that bosom slip tempting even slow witted tides to reach under just to know the smooth curve of your lady shape tethered proper and polite but with promise that when the winds would arrive of sudden you would fight to press your master down and frolic his loins with your spinning helm then break into moaning love for his storming and we are beguiled by our favorite of cravings ___________ daark (sloop ms p series) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well it sure made me want to hop aboard for a sail.  Well done, and it will be a great series Dark. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst...thank you for visiting my yot... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A slip of sloop takes on required beggerings of time, care, consideration of all things benign, unknown, to those who might knot be those who enjoy her curves... But for those who do? Sail on.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Almost worth getting lost in a perfect storm!! Love how you stir the wind D, gently down the stream. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend ________________ thank you baby blue.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
to know her curves as she sways to and fro on the tide is a beautiful thing Darkdaddy. Enjoyed finding your words here today. ~D |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms gs..you smile me |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
great series! hoping for more! ~EMB |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and we are beguiled by our favorite of cravings Amazing series, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
Ditto Margherita! A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Have you ever read a line and wished you had written it. In this poem there is one such line for me - some vixen temptress wanting her bed rebroken. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend.. _______ KD, thank you so much ______________ earl..thanks amigo.. |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Are you making references to Homer? Is this the Penelope of Odysseus? If so, it's an original approach to the subject and a wonderful poem. Bravo for weaving myths into your poetic tapestry. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Ah, the sailor's curse, that he (or she) can only fall asleep when rocking on the boat. A great read with good metaphorical imagery. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Well done.. pulls the reader along in a tidal fashion because of your syllable use, long then short, over & over like waves. Very sexy allegory, daark  Great read, here ~Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend Bas' it is a sloop down at the harbor that caught my eye and stirred some myth speak..thanks for the read _______________ easy1...yep seems we can find it lingering everywhere the shadow of the albatross has winged. thanks ______________ amary'..thanks for the eyes on my pen speak ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You shore slide us down a slip(pery) sloop, dear D. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well ship, ali-san, sometimes I am just a bit dingy I guess. thanks ms |
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