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Trapped - Nothing
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0 posted 2010-04-27 11:07 PM


M..y name is not stupid
E...xception in really extreme cases
*I hope beginners are welcomed here!  That's what I am a beginner poet.  No hush, hush about it.

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2010-04-27 11:24 PM


M...assive
E...go

Honeybee
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2 posted 2010-04-27 11:27 PM


Go Ida go!   LOL

Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-04-28 12:16 PM


I guess as someone who is relatively new here I can understand your apprehensive nature regarding this site.  I hope that you will get used to me too.  One question if I may ask.  Why the .... marks?
Honeybee
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4 posted 2010-04-28 01:27 AM


Earl, you're sweet but he/she is being sarcastic and mocking us here at pip. He/she changed his/her original posting to the secondary one you see now; Originally it was:
M...aster
E..xceptional


Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 2010-04-28 01:30 AM


I guess I am a bit naive.  Oh well...
Honeybee
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6 posted 2010-04-28 01:31 AM



No Earl, you are very sweet and kind
If you have time, you'll sadly see his/her uncouth and sarcastic remarks to many poems here.

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7 posted 2010-04-28 03:50 AM


Trapped - Nothing,

I really tried to read this and came in with an open mind.  However, I couldn't get passed the first line without thinking, "Blatant Balderdash!".  You are off to a good start, but really the writing is a bit average and pretty nonscensical.

Keep trying and I am sure that, in time, you'll get the hang of this writing stuff.

Alison

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2010-04-28 04:12 AM


It's pretty sad when someone has to hide behind an alias to insult their fellow poets. If you can't take the heat stay out of the kitchen "Mr. Newbie."
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-04-28 08:28 AM


once the flatulence is released you have trapped nothing...
Grinch
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Whoville
10 posted 2010-04-28 03:31 PM



Welcome to PIP.

Hopefully you’ll get the hang of things without too much trouble and settle in.

.

Balladeer
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11 posted 2010-04-28 08:39 PM


Your welcome came a little too late, grinch.
Juju
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12 posted 2010-04-28 09:46 PM


Oh the drama... You are welcome here and I hope to see more of your poetry.

Juju

OldBuddyOldPal
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13 posted 2010-04-28 10:25 PM


Just like all bullies.... he is just seeking attention.....to be noticed with his sarcastic words and mocking attitude.
Must be covering up for something that he is lacking.

Grinch
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Whoville
14 posted 2010-04-29 12:59 PM


quote:
Your welcome came a little too late, grinch.


Better late than never.


Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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15 posted 2010-04-29 06:18 PM


Beginners are welcome... even fools... but bullies are another matter entirely.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
16 posted 2010-04-29 08:17 PM


Yo Andrew,

Somehow, I don’t feel bullied.

Bobby

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