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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-04-27 10:36 AM


we exchanged our glances like burnished coins
vending into each others subtle offerings
then leaving our long coats unbuttoned
and lifting saddle skins up to comfortable

she said she liked the look in my eyes
and my sword too when I was a warrior
older but still worthy of gentle warring
at the edge of one of her smiling sides

like temptation was wearing our residue
the high heeled almost healing kind
that would fit behind a man most easily
if a proper penelope permitted her passions

to savor the urgency to just joust our handles

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daark (sloop ms p series)




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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2010-04-27 04:26 PM


"she said she liked the look in my eyes
and my sword too when I was a warrior
older but still worthy of gentle warring
at the edge of one of her smiling sides"

love this^
a new series~~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-04-27 05:09 PM


thank you ms MMs...you smile me
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2010-04-27 06:59 PM


the alliteration was perfectly plausible...
like a pretty pouting princess.

Smiling!


Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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4 posted 2010-04-27 09:02 PM


wow your wordplay, tone and talent is amazing!  Teach me how to write like you!!!  
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-04-27 09:25 PM


ms sun...you bring me another smile, thank you


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ms honey..you blush me with your words...your pen is lovely as it is ms

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