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The Place |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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I want to visit the place where the light goes at the end of the day I want rest in a hammock and watch as the sun rolls in and all over me In the place where everything is peaceful and everything is now and forever And every minute is the best minute yet I want to see the place where the moon goes when it hides itself at the break of day I want to lie in the grass and watch the moon creep in as stars dance for and all around me In the place where nothing ever hurts you and no one ever leaves with out saying good-bye And I'll see you again tomorrow I want to see these things with my own eyes And to touch these things with my own hands And to hold in my heart the knowledge that such things do indeed exist And are only a short ways away from where I am right now I want to visit with the light And I want to dance with the stars And to never miss a chance to say good-bye again If I don't say it...who will? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write, my friend, and I wish you forever success in your wants. j. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Pittsburgh MorningStar, This is very good work Hon. Love Bobby |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Jwesley - thank you very much for your words and wishes Bobby - many and warm thanks from the Steel City ;0) If I don't say it...who will? |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo MorningStar, I have many fond memories of "The Steel City". I have a lot of relative there. I remember sitting on a hill high above a steel plant, and watching slag being dumped in the river. Always there was a loud "BANG" and clouds of vapor from the river. That was about sixty years ago, and I don't think it's done anymore, which is probably good. However, it used to be loads of fun. Bobby |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I really enjoyed reading this,Thank you for sharing. latearrival |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Your best work, ever. I really really really liked this, Aenea. |
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