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0 posted 2010-04-24 09:37 AM



I DO NOT KNOW IF GOD LINGERS

I do not know
if God lingers
on the other side
of this mountain

but I must rest
now,
for I have spent my heart
climbing --
climbing
to here,
climbing
to now

I have climbed
through darkness
all the way
to doubt

© Copyright 2010 Anthony Armstrong - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2010-04-24 09:43 AM


doubt is everywhere, and I believe God is there too

good write as usual

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2010-04-24 02:24 PM


I have always admired your unique poetic talent Anthony. This is brilliant.
                                    Ida
                    

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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3 posted 2010-04-24 02:49 PM


This is awsome. I think, coming from someone who climbs mountains, that when you try to prove something often the anger and dejection linger enough to push god away

Juli Pearson

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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4 posted 2010-04-24 04:20 PM


Is there knowledge
That lets us know
God is beyond doubt?
I believe not.
For God requires
No proof
Only faith
And perhaps not even…
For we have choice
And God accepts both
Doubt, as well as, faith
God is beyond the duplicity
of uncertainty

God is beyond this mountain

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
5 posted 2010-04-28 08:32 PM


An excellent write.  
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