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0 posted 2010-04-23 09:37 AM


Balladeer thinks I should write being that this a poetry site. Here's a little something I made off the top of my head.

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You run and scamper
When bristles scrap across the floor
A screeching noise signals alarms
Take cover! For this has happened before

Please don't think me bad
Mom doesn't find you either cute or nice
Just another thing to frolic in dust
And hey I'll do anything for a price

For you see dear bunnies
My pockets have been empty for a while
They feel lonely without the cash
They cry to me "We want a pile"

So I heed their desires
And here I am with this broom
Sweeping these hard wood floors
Vacating this dusty tomb

© Copyright 2010 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2010-04-23 03:52 PM


That's very cute! Bravo!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2010-04-23 04:23 PM


Yo Falling rain,

There you go.  Listen to Mom, and show those dust bunnies no mercy.

Bobby

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3 posted 2010-04-23 04:48 PM


Very cute and superb ending.
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4 posted 2010-04-25 10:39 AM


Haha Thank you everyone!

-Zach

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