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Rick
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0 posted 2010-04-22 10:22 PM



In my mind I see our soldiers in their uniforms of war
Their faces stark as stone as on they see
The battle that confronts them as they run to claim a shore
In thought of home and where they soon might be

Running into bullets and defiant force of man
Small hope of making ground or foe retreat
All sticking to their orders and their military’s plan
In Gallipoli, they faced death and defeat

Their spirits rarely broken; with their pride it pushed them on
All mates that fought and faced what fate might be
No time to think or panic, to fate they did belong;
A thought, that brings both sorry and pride back home to me

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They’ve all now gone and left this earth and nightmare with their mates
Now spending time where comrades go to rest
While we stand to reflect the past, to which this day relates
The pride; resilience, courage; of each ANZAC gathered there

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Our soldiers are the front men, who with valour march on to
The orders that commanders feel should win
Some battles won, but many lost, what are these men to do?
When poor laid plans are made and wars begin

I feel a pain inside for all the many we have lost
And ridicule for man’s disease to fight
So many thousand lose their lives, at really such a cost
No one here or anywhere can say that that is right

On this day we honour those who fought to keep us free
We read their stories told so long ago
People just like you and I; I’m glad today we see
And that this day each year their spirits show

Today we honour all our troops as well as Anzacs passed
Our allies and our friends who they may be
In hope I pray that they won’t fight and wars on earth won’t last
That we the world, can nurture peace and live a life that’s free

Lest we forget

© Copyright 2010 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2010-04-23 01:22 PM


quote:
In hope I pray that they won’t fight and wars on earth won’t last
That we the world, can nurture peace and live a life that’s free



I share this hope with you, dear Rick. This was a wonderful tribute to those who have sacrificed their lives.

Love,
Margherita

Rick
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Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2010-04-24 08:05 AM


Dear Margherita, so good to see your reply my friend, with both live in the hope that the world of people can start to get one and live in peace. Thanks for the visit.

Rick

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-04-27 01:14 AM


Glad to see you back, Rick, and In fine form I see.
                                   Ida

LindsayP
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4 posted 2010-04-27 10:16 PM



Rick my good friend that is one of the very best poems that you have ever written, it

was a joy to read and that is a very high critique seeing that you have written so many wonderful poems. Take care.

Lindsay

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
5 posted 2010-05-02 08:17 AM


Dear Ida, good to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your visit and reply.

Hi Lindsay old mate, great to see you here my friend, thank you for your kind words, very much appreciated.

To you both my friends, again thank you for your replies, I hope the writing bug will hit me again and I visit here more.

Rick

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