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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-22 06:44 PM

Miss Ambitious

How can a woman
so sweet & pretty
carry me to heaven
only to drop me off
at Heartbreak City.

I wanted her kisses
because they were
so doggone delicious.
She kissed and moved on
because she was ambitious.

JamesLee
18April
2010

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-04-22 06:51 PM

James,

It’s always good to be ambitious.

Bobby

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

2 posted 2010-04-23 02:18 PM

This poem seemed to have a tinge of sadness.

OldBuddyOldPal
Member

since 2008-12-15

Posts 87

3 posted 2010-04-23 04:49 PM

Awe, James. I am so sorry she moved on...for you.

Kalandria
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 44
Yorkshire, England

4 posted 2010-04-23 04:58 PM

You capture the hurt of unrequited love and take us to a place we have all known. Well done.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2010-04-23 05:01 PM

A woman who is not ambitious seems a bit of a dud to me.
Ida

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2010-04-24 01:10 AM

Been there, done that. But I would have never held her back.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

7 posted 2010-04-24 09:07 AM

I hear ya buddy, I hear ya in this one.

Z.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2010-04-24 09:51 AM

been on both sides of this one

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2010-04-24 10:26 AM

this is sad, women are before all unpredictable, we must fit to that and take care ...Thanks for the touching and lovely poem...

regards

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

10 posted 2010-04-25 10:50 AM

These are some situations which we can’t control. Yann, said it right, sure are unpredictable.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Trapped - Nothing
Member

since 2010-04-25

Posts 52

11 posted 2010-04-26 10:08 AM

I like the shape of the poem.

The content didn't hold me at all.

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