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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-04-22 07:30 AM


she was jaunty in her warming wallow
eusta bea may as she moved her bosom there
in the brown muddy furrow of ol lazy windy

she would take the sticky dress girls down
to the gin landing on afternoons
when their nearly nothing on gathered glances

and the black boys in their skirtless skins
would move their mouths and their bodies
to make the next to me sounds in mutual urgency

eusta bea may would lean her slender wood then
next to splinter skin docks to scratch her back
on the manhands that fit her with gloving strum

when her gunnels were high, eusta bea may moaned

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daark (scribblenote: bayou sloop, shallow water slippers...gypsy craving for her muddy love and hated the dry dock medicine)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-22-2010 11:54 AM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-04-22 01:29 PM


quote:
she was jaunty in her warming wallow



Only you could write about a bayou sloop like this. She becomes alive and even conscious of her role ... so attractive. Simply fantastic. Through your eyes the scenes animate and are experienced vividly by the reader.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-04-22 02:22 PM


ms mar..thanks so much lady friend!!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-04-22 08:51 PM


That's some jaunty, warming, wallow!!

Love your infamous scribble notes too!

Hugs, you~

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-04-23 06:10 AM


thanks blue baby..have missed you
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