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Dadygoose
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0 posted 2010-04-21 09:35 PM



This old ice

Okay, I’ve had enough!
I’m not Kidding!  This time I really mean it!
If this chunk of ice doesn’t break up,
I’m gonna have to return it to the store!
I’m gonna have to throw it away!
I’ve just had it … I … I …


Hey, nobody's human!

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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2010-04-22 12:13 PM


I'm thinking... The Shining... Here's Johnny! Perhaps you need to move to a warmer climate. That, or start with a jack hammar.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Margherita
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2 posted 2010-04-22 01:45 PM


You ARE kidding! Give the sun a chance to help you! A smile may also do!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2010-05-29 08:34 PM


Wow, you get pretty intense, Jaime.  Don't ever come to Alasks during break-up - the ice jams will tip you over the edge.

xoxoxo
A

Dadygoose
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4 posted 2010-05-31 07:39 PM


Well Ali, the ice jams of Alaska can't be all THAT bad, actually they have to be GOOD
If only because Alison lives there, and I so love Alison so you can send me an Alaskan ice jam anytime you want, okay???
xoxoxoxo
J
Oh, I forgot, also a warm, Alaskan hug
J

Hey, nobody's human!

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