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icebox
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0 posted 2010-04-21 05:49 PM


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crystal clink of ice

transparent politicians

whiskey lends soft peace


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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2010-04-21 05:58 PM


good one!

"whiskey lends soft peace"  ...

wish I could afford it to find out!

applause for this 'penning' !!

Honeybee
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2 posted 2010-04-21 10:15 PM


A powerful senryu....
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-04-23 05:08 PM


I don't drink myself but the present day world sometimes makes me think of having a
drink or two  and maybe us old ones are the lucky ones when you think about it.
                                  Ida

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2010-04-23 06:26 PM


wish I liked the taste of alcohol ...then again maybe it's a good thing I don't!



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5 posted 2010-04-24 09:58 AM


wow

very cool piece here

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2010-04-24 12:00 PM


This is fabulous! I can't drink due to all my meds but there are many times I would love one.

I'm glad I'm older also.

ooxx  Marti


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Martie
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7 posted 2010-04-24 04:23 PM


Cheers!
Juju
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8 posted 2010-04-24 07:57 PM


nice

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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9 posted 2010-04-24 08:31 PM


A great senryu.  Somehow I find the older I get, the more determined I am to put things right for the future. I am sure my mother must have said that very thing.
jwesley
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10 posted 2010-04-24 10:54 PM


Great piece, my friend...my wife agrees with the premise completely...me, an occasional beer...and I do mean occasional, and that's it...don't much care for anything else...especially dislike wine.

Give me a good rootbeer though (like Barq's)and I'll do just fine!

Again...cool write!

j.

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11 posted 2010-06-28 01:30 PM


I agree....
and I enjoyed...

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