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Open Poetry #46
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2010-04-21 11:10 AM

Birds sing.
Sweethearts dream.
The heart knows that it's spring.

Love buds.
Root Beer suds.
Children play.
Moms pray.

Thank God for life.
And another spring day.
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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2010-04-22 01:45 PM

I love the way this one works...such an enjoyable read.  My favorite part was from the beginning to the end...very nicely done...a wonderful tribute to this time of year
Margherita
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2 posted 2010-04-22 01:46 PM

Yes, this is the feel of it, dear Lamar.

You say it beautifully.

Love,
Margherita
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since 2010-04-25
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3 posted 2010-04-26 10:47 AM

Your presentation is always contained.
You should free your words a little more.
Its like your poetry is constricted and cannot breathe.
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