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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
no time for inspiration for when it comes it runs... like the wind, panting like a racer in the heat of a high school heat leaving a puddle of perspiration gaining its prowess from the sun's... empowerment,shining like a tracer in the beat of an eve'ning's treat no time for obsfucation for time passes swiftly ere it duns... like the shark, swirling as a taster in a candy shop of bitter-sweet perspiration and even obsfucation are what remain...without inspiration |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
stevenr...dug it amigo! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful write, dear Steaven. You have caught inspiration in time, I would say. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Dark, high praise from you...sincerely appreciated Margherita, thank you, and I must admit that it felt cathartic when writing it...thank you for reading and leaving such a kind comment |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Inspiration is very vital for creative people. No inspiration no creativity…very well expressed. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
I really believe poetry has the potential to touch someone's heart in a positive way - and inspire someone - but ironically, your poem didn't achieve this goal. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Prasad (could you have a more poetic name?)  thank you for the kind expressions...it was appreciated |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Trapped, Thank you for your honest comments...your style reminds me of words I have read many times before: "But of these who seemed to be somewhat, (whatsoever they were, it maketh no matter to me: God accepteth no man’s person for they who seemed to be somewhat in conference added nothing to me:"...St. Paul to the Galatians, chapter 2 verse 6 (AV) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Whole lot to like here, so many great lines. Miss reading you around here, stevenr~ |
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