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One Yesterday
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One Yesterday |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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if one yesterday is offered to me by a wand, to suddenly appear, would it be the first time i ever made love-- no, of course not! would it be the first time i met "----" and she knew and i knew and we immediately embraced ..i'm suffering, here, trying to decide...perhaps, i'm wishing for a day yet to come, to relive-- yes, that must be it i'm a gready sort i've been lucky enough to have Heavens proven to me i've felt the bite of wildcats in my sleep, i've experienced things others only dream about and, in a second, suddenly forget and, yet, i'm holding out for more... please forgive me O Creation i must be more grateful than that ..so please, now, please believe me: every moment means a lot but i'd love to relive the moments that time I made love to *----* and the doors of Heaven swung open and what transpired stayed with me like from a time-release capsule to, frame by frame, make me aware of the miraculous things awaiting me if only i stay true-hearted** ** ** **: this poem written on the fly; i clicked: New Post, and started to write ..circa 2010..Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris -------------------------------- |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well you definitely have the muse upon your shoulder, for on the fly suits you well. I liked the feeling of this one. Peaceful memories to you. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and an excellent job you did too Spiros! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The longing, despair and regrets of the poet are also experienced by the reader vicariously. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..hey Andrew, The Lady, and Earl.. ..i must thank you for your encouraging comments; much appreciated.. ..spiros ------------------------- |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice flying...enjoyed muchly |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks steavenr.. ..appreciate your kindness.. ..spiros ----------- |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
met "----" these lines with "----" are mysterious, I want to know the name or person. the suspense drives the reader crazy. take care |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks Laverne.. ..nice of you to have read.. ..spiros --------------- |
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