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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-04-19 06:43 PM


Ebb Tide

Her lips
so kissable,
her personality
seeming to be
irresistable.
My heart
telling me
go after her,
but I resist,
trying to go
as slow as I can,
for my heart
belongs to another
and she wouldn't
understand.

JamesLee
17April
2010





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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-04-19 09:31 PM


Yo James,

Come on brother, one at a time is best.

Bobby

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
2 posted 2010-04-19 10:30 PM


Beware that trap, it only leads to disaster.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-04-22 06:30 PM


Thank you Robert and Andrew...this is only writing from both sides...James
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