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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2010-04-18 09:27 PM


Bones is working in
Vishakhapatnam
on the Bay of Bengal.  

Vishakhapatnam
is commonly known in India
as “The Pearl of the East”.  

Some people call Vishakhapatnam
by the anglicized version “Vizag”.  

Bones like the name Vishakhapatnam,
he thinks it has a nice ring to it.  

Bones enjoys strolling along the shore.  
It’s always crowded
with loads of friendly people.  

It has many little shops
spread out on the sand.  

It’s possible to buy
most anything at these shops.  

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-20-2010 01:42 PM).]

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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2010-04-19 10:29 PM


Seems I'm a little slow on the uptake. Such is the life of a working stiff.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2010-04-20 11:31 AM


Thanks Andrew,

I know what you mean.  It's fun being retired.

I'll have to rewrite this one.  I was so angry no one bothered with it that I erased all traces of the poem.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2010-04-20 01:43 PM


Yo Andrew,

I reposted the poem just for you.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-20-2010 03:21 PM).]

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 2010-04-20 05:16 PM


Yes, but what, or more worrisome, whom is the merchandise? From what I've come to believe is Bones' line of work, he better be careful walking the stalls.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (04-20-2010 07:41 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2010-04-20 06:01 PM


Thanks Andrew,

By the time Bones was working in Visakhapatnum, he had long retired from his line of work when he was very young.  People are no longer wildly interested in Bones the body, they only want to pick his brain--which of course is just another form of prostitution.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-20-2010 06:37 PM).]

Andrew Scott
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6 posted 2010-04-20 07:43 PM


We all got something to sell.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2010-04-20 08:42 PM


Thanks Andrew,

That's something for every working boy and girl to remember.  It kind of spreads the blame.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2010-04-22 06:37 PM


Enjoyed...I think I would just call it Visa for short...James
Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2010-04-22 06:47 PM


Thanks James,

I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

Prasad Nataraj
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10 posted 2010-04-25 10:30 AM


Bones must have loved the beach Bobby? Working there might have been tough.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2010-04-25 05:07 PM


Thanks Prasad,

Bones enjoyed working in Vishakhapatnam.  He has a lot of friends there.

At the time I was consulting with a Gov. of India group.  I've done consulting work all over India.  It was a number of years ago.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-25-2010 11:28 PM).]

Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
12 posted 2010-08-25 07:40 AM


If only the real `Bones` could have lived past his childhood and experienced Visakhapatnam. As for the real Bones you wrote ----- You can hear the sisters in there - saying their rosaries - the priest comes out - and sisters pull the curtain back - lift Bones on to a cart - pull a sheet over him - all you can see - is two lumps - one where his head is - one where his feet would be ------ `City Boy Stays Alive` is a book that you should be proud of.
Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
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13 posted 2010-08-25 04:04 PM


YO Bobby darlin'! Consultant? India? AND a book? Well knock me over with a feather and tickle me pink!  I had no idea. Way cool! ebm
easy1
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Southeastern USA
14 posted 2010-08-25 06:38 PM


careful - they want almost US$30 for that
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