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Open Poetry #46

A Night Like This

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-04-16 02:58 AM

I gaze into the night sky.
The moon smiles.
The stars wink.
Deeper into my sweetheart's arms I sink.

I inhale the fresh spring air.
And tenderly stroke my sweetheart's hair.
A shooting star streaks across the sky.
Our love takes wings and fly.

Her charms I could never resist.
Two hearts floating in ecstasy on a night like this.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

1 posted 2010-04-16 10:46 AM

Such a lovely way of writing one's love for another. Simply enjoyed it.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-04-16 06:05 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-04-18 10:16 AM

quote:
I inhale the fresh spring air.
And tenderly stroke my sweetheart's hair.

Such lovely tenderness here.

Beautiful.

Wish our Spring air was truly fresh and not mixed with the ash of the erupting Iceland volcano!

Love,
Margherita

Laverne Pacquire
Member

since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

4 posted 2010-04-21 07:52 PM

A shooting star streaks across the sky.
Our love takes wings and fly.

Her charms I could never resist.
Two hearts floating in ecstasy on a night like this

these words are charming

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2010-04-22 09:01 AM

There certainly is some magic there...
the moon, the stars and the fresh spring air.
And Love!
Nice!

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