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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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they strum their gypsy boot newsprints while komodo seeps his sorcery and leans across hollow sighed skies whispering pink the dawns lipstick day dreamers in that coffee room splendor perhaps replaying mornings in high heels when she was jeans in a breeze a day ago now a lady tree in shimmer limb lovely she steps from some yellow metal sunflower with that oregon kind of smile sigh welcome to my new day colors in her eyes but an army kind of distant is there too as if she knows of candy cane tomorrows and leaves them with preying handed santas as she dances to her own zen moaned katas and bends the voyeur's glances around fingers just to keep them tugging his moon edges ______________ daark |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You sought a sigh on a spring's day... and let the winds bring it to you.  Smiling...enjoying. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...you just smiled me lady!! thanks |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"as if she knows of candy cane tomorrows and leaves them with preying handed santas as she dances to her own zen moaned katas and bends the voyeur's glances around fingers" ____________________________________________ is that stanza cool or what?!! This is fabulous....you always seem to work metaphors, word-play, clever phrasing, emotion to absolute perfection! And your titles always rock! My muse is humbled by yours. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms honey...your muse is perfect...thanks for your touch here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How I love to read you! You totally blow me away with your poetic creativity, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...my sweet lady friend...you smile me often with your replies...thank you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
as always, your use of words is fantabulous and these are remarkable: "as if she knows of candy cane tomorrows and leaves them with preying handed santas as she dances to her own zen moaned katas and bends the voyeur's glances around fingers just to keep them tugging his moon edges" |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I echo Lady Honey and Sir Steavenr... I particularly enjoyed those four lines... I'm a little fuzzy on the rest, but then I've been working with fourth graders all day. That's enough to make anybody fuzzy. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Stevenr..thanks amigo __________ AS..thanks guy..it is just a starbucks snapshot, about a lady and special effects..how she must be a chiropractor the way she pops mens neck bones when she walks by..without even touching them.. |
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