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Open Poetry #46
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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2010-04-14 05:52 PM


An angel said I love you to me and I laughed;
I didn't take it seriously;
I thought my angel bad.

My angel said I love you once again;
I looked into her eyes and my head did a spin;
I thought my angel bad.

My angel said I love you with no regret;
I wanted to say I love you back;
I thought my angel bad.


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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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1 posted 2010-04-14 08:20 PM

I loved how you used the line `I thought my angel bad` three times.  It seems as if the angel is forcing the principle character to admit her love against her will.  Hence the third cry of `I thought my angel bad`.
Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274
2 posted 2010-04-16 02:43 AM

This poem is very thought provoking.
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