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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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Windy Weather An old lady was standing at the rail on a ship She was clutching tight to her hat in the wind An extra strong gust blew her dress up past her waist It was something that she just could not rescind. A gentleman approached with a concerned look on his face, and said softly to her through his teeth Do you know your dress is blowing up so high And revealing all that there is to see underneath. ‘Yes I know’ she answered still hanging onto her hat, ‘But you haven’t got any pants on,’ he replied, People that are passing by can see all you possess It’s not the behaviour with which one can abide. The old lady looked down at her bare spindly shanks Then up at the young fellow who was having a peek, Anything that you see down there is 85 years old But my new hat, I only bought this week. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Lindsay, People should mind their own business in the wind. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lindsay friend, I will miss you greatly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All the ladys report to the rail...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Shame on that wind for pestering the lady so. This was a fun read. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To my good friends, Bobby, Dixie and James Thanks a lot for popping in, it's always appreciated. Have a great day and take care. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Thank you Andrew for your comment, I hope you had a little chuckle. Take care. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your poems always make me smile, Lindsay. Ida |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A good one Lindsay, much enjoyed mate. Rick |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, Lindsay! A great story I haven't heard before, and you laid it out perfectly. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Smiles all the way!!! "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I thought. 'should I read this naughty write' and by the time I reached its ending I almost spit out my tea...too funny |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Dear LIndsay, I knew I would have laughed before reading the poem...I really did. thanks to you yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Thanks for the smile! I enjoyed this. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
A very funny poem. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To all my very good fiends who have made a kind comment, I thank you all, God bless. Lindsay I have been in respite for a couple of weeks and have just come home again, hense my late show of appreciation. Thank you sincerely. |
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