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What do they say in love songs today?
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What do they say in love songs today? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I wonder of them… those love songs, as they were, what are they now, what is said, read, felt…are they serene? Perhaps they are writ upon some dream, someone’s spirits fantasies that might only skim one’s skies unless one fantasizes… with frequent need of hither unto me. My cursive deems it clear that should a stranger read it one might sense a long song lingered here, within this skin… should it be deemed that a stranger read it. And cursive is a stranger word when cursing seems too close to it, as if divided between wonderment and transgression even as eventide strides this soul… what do they say in love songs today? I never seem to hear one compleat. © KRJ 4-10-10 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This flows like silk.....I've read this three times already because I love it so much, I wish I had written this gem....I especially loved the powerful ending! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....A love song, a poet knows, is seldom complete.  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
WTG, Karilea! I agree completely with every line and thought in this beautiful opine of where we were vs where they are. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a very cool write...especially loved this part: "And cursive is a stranger word when cursing seems too close to it, as if divided between wonderment and transgression even as eventide strides this soul…" ...almost a theme unto itself, this part is my favorite because of the word usage... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
nice consideration, made me think and enjoy... have a nice day yann |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Maybe you haven't heard all the love songs out there? There are some really great ones, just that we all need to take time to listen. That's the problem I think. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Perhaps they are writ upon some dream, someone’s spirits fantasies that might only skim one’s skies" what a treat Karilea! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well ms sun...the rap versions say something about shooting your dog if barks while I am kidnapping you and drugging you up to slap your fanny ..or something like that..I like your idea lots better |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
"And cursive is a stranger word when cursing seems too close to it, as if divided between wonderment and transgression" I Love this!!! ~EBM |
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