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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-04-10 06:32 AM



Red, Red, Red,
dancing in my head,
half past three,

Melted candle wax,
drip, drip, drip,
what shall I be?

Your lover maybe?
mistress of night?
maybe I will be,

a mystery...


© Copyright 2010 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-04-16 06:00 PM


Enjoyed...James
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2010-04-18 02:13 PM


all lovely ladies ARE a 'mystery' !!
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
3 posted 2010-04-19 11:05 AM


A mystery, and a beauty.

Well done.

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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4 posted 2010-04-21 07:58 PM


a cliff hanger of a poem, simple, and cute with the words, particularly red

take care

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2010-04-21 11:28 PM



The Veil of Mystique
is never lifted.

Perhaps
Beauty
and
Mystique

a symbiotic state


CG

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
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Bangalore,India
6 posted 2010-04-25 10:32 AM


Mystery unveiled here ARH!!!

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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