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Bailey
Junior Member
since 2010-04-09
Posts 12
Georgia, US

0 posted 2010-04-09 09:08 PM


Everyday is a new today
  and every tomorrow will be a yesterday
The present will always be the past
  for the new future.
Apply all you know today
  for your new today
and yesterday's tomorrow.

Bailey

© Copyright 2010 Bailey Hurst - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-04-09 09:40 PM


Yo Bailey,

Your font color makes this difficult to read, and that detracts from the meaning of the poem, which is wise.  

Bobby

LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2010-04-09 11:12 PM



Welcome to PIP Bailey, you will enjoy

your time here. Quite a cute poem, enjoyed.

Lindsay

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