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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be

0 posted 2010-04-07 01:03 AM



Maybe I can come back
To the start so I can throw
These words together in a way
You can understand

Maybe I can start over
Trying to make you stay
In my arms because that
Is where you belong

Maybe the days will
Count down to the day
You tell me
That you still love me

Maybe the nights
Won't hurt as much
When your arms are
Around me again.

Maybe life will be
Back to normal when
You are by my side once more
Maybe...

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2010-04-07 01:06 AM


Enjoyed...James
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-04-07 01:31 AM


This was a nice poem.  
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
3 posted 2010-04-07 10:24 AM


I wonder about these "maybes" too alot.
Drives me crazy.

Well said.


rebelrea
Junior Member
since 2010-10-22
Posts 20
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2010-10-23 06:22 PM


liked it a lot
Zeigeist
Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan
5 posted 2010-10-23 06:31 PM


cleverly put together and heartfelt. Nice

Zeitgeist

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2010-10-24 03:59 AM


I relate!
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