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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2010-04-06 11:04 PM



Oh More

Sweat be not upon my brow
for it’s my heart that labors, and how
constantly it pounds and pounds
but never hears love sounds
though beneath my hands you lie,
sharing with me, sliding thigh to thigh,
the whispers from your lips a relentless score,
oh more, oh more…oh, more.

© wesley james beard, jr.
    2010

my muse is drugged....forgive her/him...

© Copyright 2010 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
1 posted 2010-04-07 11:47 PM



You are quite a romantic Jimmy,

An enjoyable post my friend. take care.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-04-07 11:55 PM


Wow!  I liked how this could remain all one sentence without giving up its rhythm.  You are a master wordsmith.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-04-08 06:43 PM


Nice...James
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2010-04-09 09:30 PM


Wow!
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