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0 posted 2010-04-05 04:35 PM



My worries will waver
With wine as my savior
Brush off with a sip
Guzzle down my lips

The taste of my pride
Is swallow down with my lies
For when I get down on my knees
I'll do what I please

And

If it bother the others
I'll say that their lovers
And go on my merry way
Making them believe what I say

Its not in good distaste
For would be quite a waste
To let the seeds die in dust
Instead of burring them in lust

So don't shun when I walk on by
For I can hear it in your sighs
Call me a bigot maybe a slut
But ladies, I'm anything but

© Copyright 2010 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-04-05 05:54 PM


Zach, you are too nice to be called a slut lol enjoyed the read and seeing you post in open  
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2 posted 2010-04-05 07:01 PM


We can say "slut" here?

The title is an attention ho, tho.

But since you broach the subject, I do think that you have the seed of some good ideas. I'd like to see you probe deeper, however.

OH.



  

Enjoyed.

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3 posted 2010-04-05 07:09 PM


Always a matter of perspective... but far be it for me to judge. Peace to you and yours.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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4 posted 2010-04-05 07:29 PM


This isn't anything really related to me. Just letting ya guys know. Lol. I was inspired by a song and well this came up. Lol.

But thanks for reading!

-Zach

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5 posted 2010-04-05 07:38 PM


Never had the feeling that it was personal... in fact, I thought it had that certain lyrical quality... so you were on the mark as far as I was concerned... and I worked in radio for 15 years so I should know a thing or two of which I speak. But only one or two... I wouldn't want to overtax the brain cells.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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6 posted 2010-04-05 08:27 PM


Lol. very funny Andrew.
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7 posted 2010-04-05 11:14 PM



I am laughing
and this is full of innuendos
nicely done!


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8 posted 2010-04-06 12:15 PM


cool write!
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9 posted 2010-04-06 12:59 PM


Very  
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10 posted 2010-04-06 07:25 AM


Really nice work on this one, Zach, you took it right to the edge!
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11 posted 2010-04-08 07:29 PM


A bold and well rhymed post here, enjoyed reading a fresh perspective of life...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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12 posted 2010-04-09 06:25 PM


Nice...James
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