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Zeigeist
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0 posted 04-04-2010 10:44 PM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Zeigeist

Picture Frame

It's never enough
It never has been.
Your domestic attention.
I am fed,
I am clothed
I am a lonely.
A sad life based on pantomimic lies.

A grand empty picture frame,
With no great memory to reflect.

Zeitgeist.
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Margherita
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1 posted 04-06-2010 01:02 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very impressive imagery, yet so traurig!

Love,
Margherita
Zeigeist
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2 posted 04-06-2010 10:31 PM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

Thanks M. for your reply

Z.
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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3 posted 01-21-2011 09:41 AM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

Sad indeed, but you could always make memories to fill in that empty picture frame. Well written.

-Trina
You better believe that my sarcasm could piss a happy meal off.

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 01-31-2011 07:18 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

This is very well written.

Bobby
Raevyn Elle
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5 posted 06-29-2011 11:38 AM       View Profile for Raevyn Elle   Email Raevyn Elle   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Raevyn Elle

Very sad, but very well written.
flash
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6 posted 09-26-2011 12:44 AM       View Profile for flash   Email flash   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for flash

Yes, sad,  but if you see your own reflection staring back--it's a start. And nothing wrong with a series of "small" memories. Cheer up, the big one is just around the corner.

Al
 
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