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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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How can I describe what you mean to me Or express how you are in my thoughts Like a favorite song often enjoyed We are together, in tune, in symphony This that we share is my own reality Seems like we’ve only just begun Don’t want to lose what we have learned Of who I am, who we are, where I long to be Safe I am within your mind and free A place where love knows no bounds And are held aloft in your heart As are you within mine entirely Sacred saving grace, that place with me Seeing through the charades and masks And never between us diminished with time Only strengthened, our electric chemistry Not only loving you in the deep dark night But there for you in all the harsh daylight |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow I love this kind of romantic love poetry!!! You've expressed it so masterfully...I especially love the title and the ending. I'm shocked that this has received no replies! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sweet I wish someone would write about me this way *pouts then sighs |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Honeybee...thank you so much. Wow. I'm glad you mentioned the title and the ending. Usually they mean more to me then the actual poems themselves. Dixie, thank you and I'm sure many poems are written for you. You deserve that. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"Like a favorite song often enjoyed" the hymns of love are unalloyed harmonies vibrant hold employed melodies sweet in two hearts bouyed.  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
That's very good Klassy...very good. Thank you. |
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