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ateague38
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0 posted 2010-04-01 02:05 AM


something is missing..
your soothing touch eludes me
one can only hope.

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Earl Brinkman
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1 posted 2010-04-01 02:06 AM


I like haiku and this one is good.
ateague38
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2 posted 2010-04-01 02:18 AM


well hey thanks. loves lost are an endless supply of poetry material i suppose.lol
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2010-04-01 03:45 PM


An haiku more appropriate for me in my younger years


Something is missing
My front tooth is displaced
Too much soothing touch


Yours is better  : D

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2010-04-01 04:02 PM


Well done.
        Ida

ateague38
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5 posted 2010-04-01 06:32 PM


haha much thanks to the both of you.haiku's aren't normally my thing...but i figured a couple couldn't hurt
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