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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-03-27 08:07 PM


The Rhythm of Her Dance

Maria is SENSUAL...
thats why I wanted
to DANCE with her,
and as the night
progressed, I was
more & more impressed
with Maria.
Her coy smile,
her silky red dress,
those things she
whispered into my ear,
the rhythm of
her dance.

JamesLee
26March
2010






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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-03-28 09:06 AM


I guess it's your romantic island that inspires to let go of everything, but the senses. Sigh!

Lovely, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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2 posted 2010-03-29 12:21 PM



A very sensual post James.

There must be some fantastic girls over there. Good luck to you.

Lindsay

2islander2
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3 posted 2010-03-29 02:17 PM


so sensual poem, a great read.

yann

Zeigeist
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4 posted 2010-03-29 06:40 PM


ah yes, the enjoyment of the mating dance.

Nice work

Z.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-03-29 08:54 PM


Thank you Margherita, Lindsay, 2islander2 and Zeigist for the wonderful responses...James
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