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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-03-25 10:56 AM

I can close my windows to those cameo figurines
my namish rebirthing of my sixty seven
when my gospel was celibacy celebrations

with sixties and fifties and other metal music
planting the thai died gophers deep enough
but never far enough apart for salvation

just to stay ahead of that sweet smell wetness
when morning was another sticky page of memory
there were highways down the road from returning

and women then that never cried for their lovers
or the plastic doctors that made their bodies
into dreams that didn't fit a warrior's hands

so my suns still sip whiskey on mexican afternoons

___________

daark

(scribblenote: 1967, Vietnam border...50 and 60 calibers make a special music that one needs to clean up after..and stateside it was just another green field..)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-25-2010 12:48 PM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2010-03-25 11:52 AM

You write intriguing puzzle pieces that I love to fit together - and your use of words brings me back again and again.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-03-25 12:45 PM

ali-san..thanks little one...a vietnam revisited piece is all..

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2010-03-25 01:18 PM

Hi DS...my eyes tricked me into thinking you were talking about a 67 Camero. Glad to see your scribble notes. Hope all is well in the south of Cali

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-03-25 02:17 PM

Had too many friends who didn't come home...
and the music always reminds me so.

Well committed, were your suns.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2010-03-26 06:23 AM

afraid I can relate to your words more than I would wish to...some days.

MM

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2010-03-26 12:17 PM

Most impressive, dear D.! Every single line brings deep emotions.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2010-03-26 03:31 PM

pipcrew amiga's...thanks for your reads and comments...you bless me always.

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