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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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0 posted 2010-03-24 01:44 PM



I used to be beautiful.
I used to be free.
I used to have a few good men
hovering all over me.

I used to drive the streets
and fit into size 5 jeans,
I drank whenever I wanted to,
I was the maker of gorgeous scenes.

I used to walk the beach,
I had friends I could touch,
I made my own money and time
and I laughed too much.

I used to get into trouble
and there was never a boring day,
drama was my middle name
and I was the star of the play.

Now I'm 40 and married
(and might I add, not very well)
I'm going to write a book
in case I don't live to tell
who I once was
before I became this "me"
of everything I loved and lost
now that I'm no longer free.


© Copyright 2010 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-03-24 03:12 PM


40 means that you are still very young and I believe that we are truly free only within our hearts, dear Dixie. You are in full bloom and you will live to tell and enjoy your life much more than you might now assume.

Excellent. And yes, write that book, you are good with that and your thoughts can be freely expressed.

Love,
Margherita

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2010-03-24 07:31 PM


sad

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-03-24 07:44 PM


Fine writing...with each new moment you are free...James
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
4 posted 2010-03-24 08:44 PM


Have you never heard the true saying,"Life begins at forty"?

It is true; soon you will realize these can be the most fulfilling days of your life. I learned more between forty and fifty than I had ever learned befor. And even more between fifty and sixty and sixty and seventy. Life is a learning process and we seem to learn more of what is neeeded at each stage of our lives.  You are Loved at what ever stage of life you are.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2010-03-24 11:20 PM



Dear Dixie every stage in life has something good going for it, if we can only

see what it is. Sit down my friend and count all the blessings that you enjoy,

think about them and face life anew. We are all willing you onwards to happy days to come, now its up to you. Good luck, love

Lindsay

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