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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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0 posted 2010-03-24 12:20 PM




Burning eyes
Golden halos of fantasy
Your the scent in the air

You dont know me
I dont know you
Can i just dream?

Will i be found or just dream' in?
I want you to notice my lost hopes for you
The feelings i felt last year are here again to stay
My heart has figured out that its nothing you want
Why cant my mind turn it around

Spring has came to make the sun shine
The glow of everything i lost is calling my name
Let me wake up again

© Copyright 2010 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2010-03-29 09:07 PM


Nicely Done!
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