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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-03-23 10:30 PM


Soft Sun

Warmth trickles, present peace
Stay sunshine, ever be
hope radiates, this soft sun

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2010 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2010-03-23 10:45 PM



So ethereal and soothing to read, very pretty!

gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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California
2 posted 2010-03-24 12:44 PM


Amen
viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2010-03-24 01:35 AM


You rule.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2010-03-24 10:36 AM


Beautifully expressed and soothing.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2010-03-24 11:46 AM


gorgeous!

the sun isn't out today but i know she'll be back

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2010-03-27 08:02 PM


So nice...James
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2010-03-27 10:12 PM


Oh that she would stay
moments longer. We've been
under so much gray...

nice, nice is this!


2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
8 posted 2010-03-29 02:25 PM


enjoyed the sensation of your poem, great write...

yann

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