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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Winter Had I known that the heart breaks slowly and all at once it's killing sharpness dismantling itself into unrecognizable shapes I never would have. Had I known that insignificance could stifle the breath and everything we had together was worth nothing to him I never would have loved. He became my regret like a murderer running his fingers down my spine the brutal winter that never warms yet leaves only an emptiness and a longing for my heart. By Melissa Long-Monette |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Your poem cuts to the heart, deeply expressive words of pain and regret. Well done my friend, write on! Dennis |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Melissa that is such a heart rending post that just tears one apart. Look around for someone who will bring you joy and happiness. Good luck my dear. Lindsay |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And yet with love comes pain - lest we fail to feel at all. We may we love again.. Nicely written, Melissa..  |
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