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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2010-03-22 01:06 PM


I Knew

The moment I saw your face,
I knew I wanted to have you,

The moment I saw your smile,
I knew I’d never seen anything so fine,

The moment I saw your eyes sparkle,
I knew I had seen an angel,

The moment I saw your heart,
I knew I had to make you mine.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

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1 posted 2010-03-22 01:40 PM


whew! What a beauty!
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2 posted 2010-03-22 06:14 PM


Your pen keeps producing more and more magic... The thought of knowing when you saw her heart... that's not just beautiful... that's seeing what's real. *S*

Splendid write! *S*

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