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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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"Fear" A corner hides a huddled mass tiny hands clutch shaking knees tears fall in streams from eyes shut tight afraid to see the darkness that surrounds. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Very good, I like this one. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Touching and sad but oh, so good, Lone wolf. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is poignant in it's melancholy...you've said so much that all can relate to in few words...that's true talent! |
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