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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2010-03-21 09:12 PM


For Ever, and a Day


I love your lips; I love your kisses,
They take my breath away,

As in my poems, the emotions felt,
Words can mean more than they say,

I feel your heart; I see your soul,
I hear what you whisper to me,

I reach for you, you take my hand,
And we let our spirits run free,

Quiet your fears, and dry your tears,
For as tenderly as I can,

With limitless clarity, you will see
You can always trust this man.

So come to me, don't hesitate,
For we know what we desire,

Yes, love is more than emotions,
Yet, emotions can start a fire,

I love your lips; I love your kisses,
They take my breath away,

Press yours to mine, like you mean it,
Right Now, For ever, and a day.

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The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

© Copyright 2010 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2010-03-22 07:02 AM


Tender and passionate all at once, dear Tracey.

Lovely write.

Love,
Margherita

suthern
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2 posted 2010-03-22 06:06 PM


Passionate perfection!! This is absolutely beautiful, my friend... both the words and the heart they offer. *S*
Honeybee
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3 posted 2010-03-22 08:37 PM



Absolutely beautiful!!! I LOVE love poems!

LindsayP
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4 posted 2010-03-23 12:16 PM





So come to me, don't hesitate,
For we know what we desire,

Yes, love is more than emotions,
Yet, emotions can start a fire,

I think you had better watch out Tracey
in case you start a fire that you can't put

out. you wrote it very well my friend. enjoyed. Take care.

Lindsay

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5 posted 2010-03-24 12:54 PM


very romantic! Love this!
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