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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-03-20 11:25 PM



Why cant my eyes say anything
cant you tell you have a spell on me
Your golden eyes keep me coming back
The pretty face i see in return
How much would i have to work to see it everyday
i would give you everything i got
now how long must i wait to see you doing alright
where are you going after this?
will it be my last chance to see you
Even thought we havent talked i still feel a pressure
I know you dont know me but how long must i wait to see a heart like yours again
my heart has been called as hard a  diamond
now will it soften for your warm hands
i dont even know you
I need to find a reason to talk to you
I cannot lie

(eh i dont like it but i cant explain anyway)

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2010-03-20 11:30 PM


Yknow...I can't explain either...
But I liked this poem, and for my own reasons...whatever work had to be done, would be most enjoyable side by side.

Thanks~~

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